хм.. я свою песню выложу.

[Jumper]

Уже упоминала, что сочинила слова для знакомого композитора .
И вот она - моя первая песня!

Here comes the girl with tears in her eyes,
She said she lost her friend.
She says it’s forever, she breaks down and cries,
She thinks that it is the end.
She doesn’t see shining sun in the sky,
She says that her life is gone.
She doesn’t see someone’s waiting for her,
She wants to be alone.

But love is all, love is all around there,
Love is everywhere.
She doesn’t see love is waiting for her,
She doesn’t really care.

Her life is a road with no place to rest,
No way to come back at all.
She can’t move anymore, with no air in her chest,
She falls on the ground and crawls.
One day she will stand up, will open her eyes,
Will see someone strong and tough.
He’ll bring her the world back, he’ll stop all the cries,
He’ll show her the way to love,

Love is all, love is all around there,
Love is all around.
Swims in the water, flies in the air,
Sure it can be found.

Love is all, love is all around there,
Love is here today.
One day she will notice some love in her heart
And she will want it to stay.

Вопрос: Продолжать ли мне сочинять?

1. Нет! Найдутся и получше!		0	(0%)
2. Продолжай, может что-то получится.		0	(0%)
3. Конечно! Эта песня супер, другие могут быть еще лучше!		2	(100%)
Всего:		2

@музыка: FeD Trance Project -Love is All Around There

@темы: Глэмми сонграйтер, Креатив

Comments

[Мариола]

Классная песня! Мне почему-то напомнился Maroon 5 В таком стиле.

Her life is a road with no place to rest,

No way to come back at all.

She can’t move anymore, with no air in her chest,

She falls on the ground and crawls.



Вот эти строчки мне больше всего понра.

[Jumper]

Mariola diary thanks



Мне тоже marron5 напоминает...

this love has take a little of me

she said goodbye too many times before

her heart is breaking for me

i have no choice cos i don't say goodbye anymore...